One engaging paragraph is far better than endless run-on sentences.
“Looking for a partner in crime,” “Are you my other half? in neuroscience yet wouldn’t even get an associate’s degree in “Writing an Online Dating Profile 101.” Many of our clients were successful, personable people (from grad students to physicists) who would make great girlfriends and boyfriends—once they had a dating profile that made them sound unique, one that couldn’t be cut and pasted into someone else’s.
I know what your going to say, these guys were all naturally handsome.
I thought of that and yes some looked like they were borderline male models, but not all of them.
My grandparents were born in Italy–I love to cook and break bread together. I had to speak Italian if I wanted something other than pasta for lunch.
I was also able to sweet-talk her and avoid the wrath of her wooden spoon.